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for redlining the perspective and anatomy (twice!) and to 
for helping me with the lights/shadows and for showing me the liquify tool in photoshop!
really like this work you did amazing job + very realistic especially her feet\skin
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, too! 
The issues I have with this are 1. The composition I feel could still have been pushed. I'm not sure what I might have done but I feel there was a better way to solve this compositional problem. There's some cliches of fantasy here with the alluring mysterious woman with a sword on a rooftop but I'm not going to harp on that too much.
2. Texture. This is a difficulty with digital art that I'm sure you've seen yourself. It's hard to do it just enough but if you don't do it at all something visceral seems to be missing from the image. Everything here seems really smooth and similar because of lack of texture.
3. Atmosphere and distance. The background, while nice, I feel could stand to haze out at a distance. It seems a bit too close for what you were going for. The buildings in the far background could stand to fade into the background color just a bit more and it would push them back into the distance. The foreground has some issues with solidity (something I still struggle with myself). The vents for example, don't look completely solid and the ledge kind of bleeds in and out of solidity. However, I give you props for being willing to let some space fade completely into shadow. Illustrators like us tend to want to show everything and it's a hard thing to do to let something be hidden.
Overall, kudos for all the hard work you put into this. It paid off with a decent piece in the end and I hope this critique helps you more on whatever path you're pursuing with your art.
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